I like it! Can't wait for this to get off hiatus.

nichloe

I really liked the prologue. It was a very unique idea how you started it. The story itself sounds very interesting. I can't wait to read it. How much more do you have to write in the Masterson series?
-Ashley

Oh I love the intro!! It's so entertaining XD Awesome beginning to this story and you're basing it on my favorite fairy tale!! Look forward to seeing more :]

Damn, I didn't want to read this until Love Game was finished so that I wouldn't have to wait too long for an update, but I just couldn't resist! I really love your work :) Although I must confess that I haven't read You Belong With Me. I read the reviews for the last chapter (I always do this with complete stories :P) and there wasn't a happy ending! D: As realistic as that ending may be, I'm a sucker for happy endings :/ *sigh* I'm sure I'll read it eventually though...
Anyway, back on topic, this story has pontential. Your prologue is engaging. Just very well done. And goddamn, why is this not an M? haha j/k... sort of

Oh, I bet this is going to be a really good story. (:
Can't wait for the update!
-KIx0x

AW! Jeez you write fantastic stories! -has a dreamy expression- First Carter and Aj, Then Fallon and River, now Beauty and the Bear! :D I really like how you put Beauty and the bear... instead of beast! And i think this is a faboulous idea! I cant wait to read it!

Ooh, I love it when fairytales are revamped into a modern day situation and well, it's true, we read a lot of Cinderella but never Beauty and the beast so I am looking forward to seeing how you work this especially with the twists you said you have planned. And on that note, I have also looked at who you have taken note to have your characters look like and well, yeah I can see Jensen Ackles as a prince. Heck, I'd love him as my prince. I'm even using him in my story. You just can't look past him lol. So update soon!

This seems cute.. i'm definetely curious at how your going to develop the simple yet beautiful plot line of beauty and the beast. Good luck and can't wait to read more!

i can wait for this story!=]

Hehe... I love your prologue. It was interesting to read, especially with you take on other fairytales (equipped with their lil' men singing "heigh ho". Definitely an original and fresh idea.

Also I like the way you described the prince. How you said he wasn't "spoiled, selfish or unkind" and then repeated the sentence and said he was a "giving, selfless and chilvalrous"! And the part about his "horse" being the Ford Mustang... Genius

The way you write is really creative. You don't just write, you... (looking for a word)you weave a story out. The sense in which you write is really like a magical fairytale. Ot's very fun to read because it's intriguing!! It sounds like a real opening to a fairytale (with the whole voice of a guy or girl reading). You know how at the start of fairytale movies they always have a narrator? That's it!
A lot of people write stories that are intended to be "fairytales"... but their opening don't always seem "fairytale" like enough. Yours does!!

I never really liked the story of the Beauty and the Beast, but I think your story will change my opinion on it! ^^

I am really impressed, I could not spot a single error...

Your ending paragraph is great, about how you're just a third party... haha made me chuckle...

Am looking forward for the story to begin!

Courtney

I'm excited about this one

I liked this a lot. :)
You should write in first person perspective with this kind of tone more often. It's really down to earth and conversational, with all the little blunders that regular people make when they're just trying to talk, because let's face it: normal people can't just throw out eloquent speeches right away.
I also really liked how you were able to incorporate a lot of Disney references smoothly. This seems like a great story, and I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

great intro! i can't wait to read this, beauty and the beast is my favourite!

i love any stories somehow related to beauty and the beast!

but its so hard to find them :[

but i know you wont let me down :D

ahI i cant wait for this one
i truly love all of your stories :D

Yay a Beauty and the Beast story! I loved the prologue so far and I can't wait for more! But of course I'd rather finish Love Game first.