|Reviews for The Red Ball|
| Gizmooo 9/29/09 . chapter 1
By the way, good story. Nice and depressing, but the changing from day to day is rather abrupt, doesn't give the feeling of time passing at all. Just thought you might want to look at that
| Selly 9/29/09 . chapter 1
As long as we are goin with similar sonding adjectives... Meanie moony.
| Jhaynee 8/31/09 . chapter 1
That was so sad. I liked this piece, I love the word choices and the description, but that was so sad.
The representation of the red ball in comparison to Mark's fate was really well done.