By the way, good story. Nice and depressing, but the changing from day to day is rather abrupt, doesn't give the feeling of time passing at all. Just thought you might want to look at that

As long as we are goin with similar sonding adjectives... Meanie moony.

That was so sad. I liked this piece, I love the word choices and the description, but that was so sad.

The representation of the red ball in comparison to Mark's fate was really well done.

Great job!