Intriguing. :) What's the story behind this one?

A short, yet thought-provoking, piece. :)

I like the idea of this piece. I think it leaves the reader wanting more and interpreting it in many ways. I think the first two lines were a bit repetitive though and I also feel like it needed a bit more. Still nice job.

I like this poem. It's very short, but to the point and describes how I feel a lot of the time.

Nice! Short poetry is always interesting, because it's generally the kind that makes you think!! :D

A very impressive poem, short, but good!