I love your writing and your stories so feel free to post the one you're writing for your class

this is really good, i love how it's different people's perspectives on the same event; although i also love reading about alanna and dom! keep up the great work!

This is really good!!
Keep going!!
It's good!!
Write some more!

omg. so much drama and the plot is so good!! i was so scared that savannah would end up heart broken at the very end. maybe that's why jase is here? ;) update soon!

I really liked this chapter. I love Dom and Alanna. I hope they manage to work things out.

A few mistakes I noticed:
1) "I was justI just couldnt handle it." - Awkward phrasing
2) "because of someone neither of us" - You don't finish this sentence

Can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!

HAHAH DONT BE SORRY.
i love it when a good story makes me cry.
but then my brother usually walks in and calls me a ** for crying over a story.
he doesnt evenn knoww until he's read your stories !!

I LOVE DOM.
But I probably would've loved Carter more.
But I'm getting this attachment to Jason even though he's only been in a few chapters.
I have this thing for the background guys.
Like, I have this thing for jacob black in twilight to edward who i think is ugly in the movie.
ahem. so yeah.
update soon (:

ooh yay, things are getting sorted out. is savannah gonna end up with jason or something? cos she isn't going to end up with landon, he's still in love with chrissy...can't wait for more ~ Alenor

:D, i'm special, lol!

thanks for the update, looking forward to reading more soon!

i hope u have an epilogue or something where we learn landon and chrissy dont have a happily ever after at all... urgh

it's so bastardly to string a person along like he did with her... anyway, fantastic chapter, looking forward for more from you (with all of your works!)

I totally forgot how good this story was until you reposted it!
So good. CRIED last time! But when you updated it last time, I read it but forgot what it was about so dropped it. ):
And so I decided to re-read it you know to see if I'd cry again.
DEFINITELY DID (:
And definitely excited for the next chapter!!

hmm, this is great so far. i can't wait for more to see what happens next. cya next time ~ Alenor

i like the story but if chrissy and landon end up together, ill be very dissapointed.

So glad this one is back :) I love it so much ! Man, I still feel bad for Savannah... I get so obvious that Alanna and Dom are going back together, same for Chrissy and Landon. I mean, I'm not against true love and I know that they were the "real deal" but I dunno... I just like Savannah so much. =(

Jeez the drama! It is addicting though.

A couple mistakes:
1) ".. to listed to this." - Change 'listed' to 'listen.'
2) "Non the less.." - Usually it's one word, nonetheless.

You're really good with getting the story updated! Can't wait for more!

I wonder what's going to happen now between Savannah and Landon and if she is still going to go to the following days of the reunion without him.

Corrections to be made:
1) "That was the only we had said since he told me that he stillyeah." - This sentence is a little confusing.
2) ".. out a mall smile." - Change 'mall' to 'small.'
3) "I was like I.." - Change the first 'I' to 'It.'
4) ".. we both hear.." - Change 'hear' to 'heard.'

Can't wait to read Dom's view of events!