Well wasn't that a refreshingly powerful piece. I liked it.

I liked this a lot.
You used the words in a really clever way and I really felt the emotion in it.
Great Job! :)

WOW, that was really really great! Holy Damn I read it four times. Great great job!

Holy wow, that was amazing. Very well written. I thouroughly enjoyed this, especially: "Many times I’ve tasted that smile you think so highly about. But sweetie, you should know, it was bitter against my mouth." So good. (:

I really like the ending. Kind of like "Though we were together you never really had me."

I know this may sound strange, but I giggled while I read this. It is one of my favouriets now. This poem/song i\really is well writen and sounds like a great story.