| Reviews for Ode to feet |
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simpleplan13 9/6/09 . chapter 1The punctuation here is really odd. You only have those two periods, but that middle part is more than one sentence and those last two lines should have a period. I liked the idea here. Feet are so important to us. I can't imagine life without them. They definitely deserve an ode. I think yours was a good one. Only thing is the last line's phrasing seemed a bit forced for the rhyme. PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile). |
Mirabella 9/1/09 . chapter 1A lovely ode to feet! Your poems are refreshingly original! |