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SilentVoices 2009-09-03 . chapter 1
I liked how you transformed something we all know, a pair of jeans, into a message.

I don't know if this is correct but I took it as... a person building up the negative and bad things (lint) in their life. Realizing it is wrong and yet continue to do it (seap into seams). Remembering what life was like before (fondling stitches).

I loved this poem. Will favorite. Great work and thanks for sharing. :)
gg. lass 2009-09-01 . chapter 1
i really enjoyed this.
the third stanza was the best in my opinion.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,
gg
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