|Reviews for When Darkness Calls Me|
| Eternal Skies 9/1/09 . chapter 1
this is...dark! amazing! great poem, keep writing!
"For the darkness
Conceals many a thing
Sometimes it fills me
With a deep, dark desire
A need and longing
That burns like a fire
Or darkness may beckon
With a cold embrace
A deep, dark, depression
That I can’t erase"
maybe if it was: "That i can't escape" ? it sounds the same so it's not much of a difference, dunno!
| kloun mannequin 9/1/09 . chapter 1
I like the thing about the darkness is inside, these emotions in this poem are strong.