this is...dark! amazing! great poem, keep writing!

fave lines:

"For the darkness

Conceals many a thing

Sometimes it fills me

With a deep, dark desire

A need and longing

That burns like a fire

Or darkness may beckon

With a cold embrace

A deep, dark, depression

That I can’t erase"

maybe if it was: "That i can't escape" ? it sounds the same so it's not much of a difference, dunno!

I like the thing about the darkness is inside, these emotions in this poem are strong.