 simpleplan13 2009-09-04 . chapter 1First off, superhero is one word, not two. Also, I think you repeat the word superhero way to much in that first stanza.
"the why I think you're"... you don't need the word the
"You never cheer me when I’m sad."... you actually cheer someone up, not just cheer them when they're sad.
"saying me hi, what’s going on?"... saying hi to me
"Oki doki, I must be crazy,"... Okie dokie
"I don’t want to fall for a strange that uses"...stranger
I don't like this because there's no reason to call him a superhero. I know that's the point, but I think you need to explain why you even started calling him that. It was just a confusing concept.
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