Very cool. I like how you changed the original story, a smart move

You wrote well about how alice spent the hundred years taking care of everyone, and I laughed when the kissing part came; the prince's comment was so funny "Well, I guess I'm not needed here after all..." xD

Very well written

An absolutely stunning retelling of the story :) I loved the twist at the end; I think it was magnificent!

That was really sweet and funny. An interesting take on the fairytale, I like it :D
Especially all the different fairies (Ethel's description is the best, imo).

oh my, the ending's surprised a lot! it's kinda funny but cute too, love should be like that, it's not about a kiss but alice stayed with aurora during a lot of time, they deserve to be happy.