I really loved this story! I could just see the main character jumping from the roof and being caught on the fence! Please turn this into a series; I would really love to read it. BTW I loved the Lara Croft reference.

THIS WAS GREAT! will u write a 2nd chapt?

Well that was certainly very interesting, I like the way you write, I'm honestly glad that it wasn't any clearer, good job.