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wolfen princess 9/1/09 . chapter 1The first three lines I like, but the fourth I think would be better if you shortened it. For example: A good taste Looks real Also, you kind of repeat yourself three times, by saying the chocolate looks like a coin, it's looks real, and it's realistic. I'm not sure, however, what kind of route you would want to go to fix that, if you even choose to... But I like the simplicity of the poem (and I really like those coins) Wolfen Princess |