I normally don't go on fictionpress anymore but you're one of the few people I still get updates for and I have to say it was another great story :D

I LOVE this story. The characters are real and multifaceted rather than being the fantasy land characters that exist in so many stories. Owen reminds me of my boyfriend a little bit, he's one of those nice guys that really don't get enough credit in romances!

Ps. Hope your fixed the car issues with your bad date without too many troubles

I'm so jazzed you wrote another one-shot, especially because it connects the other characters you wrote and that I love! Thanks for posting this; I always look so forward to them.

I could only spot one grammar/spelling error which was when you used "me" instead of "my" at the end of the first paragraph. After that I just got sucked in by the story, haha. But yeah, great flow, it was realistic and sweet, by not sickeningly so. I thought it was pretty good, especially how not everything turned out fine, the timing was appropriate and the characters seemed relatable (ie. not the gorgeous girls and charmingly witty guys who seem perfect in every way apart from, maybe, having too much pride).

This was awesome! I love Owen, he is so cute!

i love all of your one-shots. They are really really good.

Take care.

p.s. i think déjà vu was spelled wrong though. You spelled it like dai ja vu. Just a minor mistake.

aw its sweet. its so natural and not cliche, well i didn't think it was. Owen really deserved that second chance!

Wow, it is a story i never saw coming. But it's is captivating, not only that, it was intriguing. You got a laugh on my face with the term "royal bitch" it was funny. Good one!

Aw so cute!

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aLI

You're right, this seems pretty realistic! (: I like it a lot, sorry to hear your date didn't went as well? Hm guys, they just ugh suck! LOL. And Owen is so swet, *sighs* :D

I really enjoyed this, it was great! So glad they got together in the end :)

Can I just say that I am absolutely loving your one-shots? One-shots that you somehow want to be more than one-shots but then again they're so awesome already so it'd be fine if they stayed as one-shots. Yep, they're that kind. This is one is exactly that kind.

I admit that I wasn't sure how you were going to pull it off, what with Owen seeming to be a weak pushover in the beginning, and Marina being a strong chick (not as strong as Alita, though), but hey. You pulled it off. Although I would have liked a tad more of Marina examining her unknown growing interst in Owen. Just a tad. Heck, you can even ignore me. Haha!

And the supporting characters are AWESOME in their small, supporting way. Each had just the right amount of screentime.

Write more!

i must say, it's very cute

i knew it was gonna be good, i didn't expect it to be this amazing

i love the characters and their different personalities

& i love the plot line.

based on true events huh?

that really sucks! it's one of the reasons i'm so glad i don't drive

loved it!

izzie