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firestar267 2009-12-08 . chapter 13
I really enjoyed reading this. I thought it was refreshing, realistic and well written. thank you!
Colocho 2009-11-25 . chapter 2
I hate his dad already DX
Drew and Claude remind me or me and my broher, we are just different species of human. Only I´m guessing so far thet claude is gay too XD
MostFrantic 2009-11-14 . chapter 12
Gotta go. On the edge of my seat so far.
MostFrantic 2009-11-14 . chapter 7
Still love it.

Chapter 7, first line: Instead of "to vastly different things", it should be "two vastly ..."
MostFrantic 2009-11-14 . chapter 3
I don't usually read stories with sequels, but I'm interested. Can't wait to continue.

Just a small spell check: Chapter 3 - near bottom of chapter: "continues" should be continuous, and "fuck of" should be "fuck off" (2 f's). Check both "off's".

Well, back to the Masons.
Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 12
*sniff sniff* Poor Drew got kicked out and can't even talk to his own brothers. I hate how parents can do that to there own child :(
Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 8
Drew just needs to dump her and free himself of all his troubles.
Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 6
Aww, Donovan is such a good little brother *hugs him tight*
Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 5
great chapter, greatly written to slow there emothons.
Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 4
I have finally got the time to read this. Yeah! You'll updated a lot since I last saw it.
Keela1221 2009-11-05 . chapter 12
I'm kinda confused...Is this the end? If so will there be an epologue?
young-cardinal 2009-10-22 . chapter 10
God I was so waiting for Drew to come out on her. That would have been one bugger of an explosion XD

I sat down and read the whole story today and I really like it so far :] I'm really interested to see Donnovan's story when you get to it. He reminds me a little bit of my own character (but about 149837948379479374 times less naieve). Can't wait to see how this resolves :]
Keela1221 2009-10-18 . chapter 8
Ugh! I really don't like Tiffany! Poor Drew, Can't wait for the next update
Keela1221 2009-10-06 . chapter 6
Oh, wow. Donovan is cute. Damn is he inquisitive? Damn, he is adorable. I can't wait for his story!! Poor Drew, hopefully things work out.
Chloeee 2009-10-06 . chapter 6
It's going great, the story is. Liking it a lot =D Update soon!
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