Hey,

Like the chapter. Couple of typos within the story - you have "fed" instead of fend etc. Also as much as I love your character and how you have matched the way he speaks to his actual age I'm unsure of how this will work for a full story, especially if he's going to get side-tracked with things going on around him all the time... there's a possibility it could get quite annoying in the end if you get what I mean. Anyways would like to read more so please post soon.

Col