 fictionluvr 2009-11-25 . chapter 12Enjoyed the little scene with Ms. Shoe, as someone has named her. :)Chase had better NOT fall in love with her! Despite his past cluelessness, surely he has better sense that that! If he does, he needs knocked upside the head.
Loved the line, "Well you don't look like a bank robber."
Robert seems like a nice enough guy. Hope so, although I don't want him to be "the one." Great job. :) |
 batzmaru347 2009-11-18 . chapter 12 Yay, we finally meet Mr. Worthington. I hope he doesn't turn out to be a jerk. |
 kittyluvr1 2009-11-18 . chapter 12Good chapter in introducing Mr. Worthington,with his interest in Miranda maybe Chase would realize that Miranda wants a husband not a buddy. |
 funnechick 2009-11-18 . chapter 12Hmm...another guy, interesting. I wonder if Chase will get jealous? |
 MistressBlack852 2009-11-18 . chapter 12so it begins! :P
i'm so excited to read what happens! great chapter :D
i loved the way you introduced robert :P
can't wait unitl the next one ^^ |
 grumpirah 2009-11-18 . chapter 12well looks like a little bit of good luck is coming her way. Ms. Shoe isn't going to be a future problem is she? |
 dwpea. 2009-11-18 . chapter 12 Haha...nice!
Everyone in the town seems so desperate!
can't wait till next chapter!! =] |
 chelsea-rae 2009-11-17 . chapter 11thanks for the update! i kinda feel bad for not reviewing in a long while coz i realized i say pretty much the same thing in each review. anyway, once again, i loved this chapter though i kinda felt bad for chase, then again if i were in miranda's place i wouldn't feel bad for him coz he deserved it. haha. also, i'm so excited to read about the new character.
keep up the good work and good luck with your stories!:) |
 batzmaru347 2009-11-08 . chapter 11 I'm glad that Miranda was very straightforward with Chase and admitted that he hurt her. Too bad Chase didn't explain why he left. I wish the chapters were longer! |
 kittyluvr1 2009-11-08 . chapter 11Good chapter with Miranda telling Chase the truth about her feelings though Chase probaly didn't notice that most of the other women Miranda's age and even her sisters are married with children. |
 dwpea 2009-11-07 . chapter 11 HE DIDN'T APOLOGISE (properly)...*gasp*
Miranda was harsh but I guess she felt the hurt of betrayal for 6 years but my gosh, didn't Chase think that there would be consequences for leading on a girl(kinda) and dumping his best friend without a goodbye or explanation? Is he naive or does he have a solid reason...?
my my...=]
Thanks for your update! |
 bingo7 2009-11-07 . chapter 11 *drum roll*
I'm so excited! New characters are always exciting, especially when they play an important role in the story. Lovely awkwardness, I don't know how I'd handle it. I hope Chase explains to her WHY he never wrote, because I'm rather curious myself. Update soon! |
 MistressBlack852 2009-11-07 . chapter 11so awesome!! totally loved the awkward wagon ride lol
i really want to know why he left without telling her, unless it was just because but hm there must be a reason heehe
aw this was such a sad chapter though, loss of friendship is, in my opinion, one of the worst feelings ever.
can't wait until the next chapter!! :D |
 LeAnn 2009-11-07 . chapter 11 Well it wasn't exactly what I expected, or wanted lol but I guess you can't rush these things. I hope miranda can eventually forgive chase. I still want to know why he left all of a sudden. |
 g 2009-11-07 . chapter 11 competetion,good b/c Chase most definitely needs to be made aware of what he loseed when he tossed Miranda to the side so easily. |