love the story

I just found out about this website and yours was the first story I read! Let me just say that I LOVE this story and you have gotten me to read more. You are a great writer and I can't wait for more! I really like the character Patience, she sounds so cute. Please write more as soon as you can. I can't wait!

Aw, poor baby. Upadate! I'm interested to see what they are up to.. Hm... :D Love it!

I haven't ever read anything like this! It's fantastic, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen!!

Zo x

I liked it. A good girl can be bad sometimes. LOL. Who hasn't lied to their teacher? I mean, seriously. Good chappie.

:D :D :D I'm liking this story. Patience sounds like a sweetie pie! Great work!

Aw, so cute. It's sweet to be so nice to Pactience like that.

Oh. Yikes. I don't know what I'd do if my dad did that. Probably cry like she did. This was great! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Aw, best friends fighting is the worst. D: But it's good! I'm gonna keep reading this! :D :D

This was good! :D :D That dude sounds like a jerk. So does her dad! Me go to next chapter now! :D :D :D :D

Aw, how cute! :D :D Me like this story! :D :D NEXT CHAPTER!

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The whole panther thing sounds like something I would do. :D :D Hilarious!

One question thought. It said, “So is she- Sally’s real,” I said with the most serious face I could muster, although inside I wanted to burst into tears" Why does it say tears? Should it be laugh? It just didn't make sense.

GOOD CHAPTER!

BUSTED! LOL! This was really good! NEXT CHAPTER!

Haha, I like, I like. Cas and Star are hilarious. I love the suspense, but I have to stop for tonight... I can beta for you as soon as you go to DocX and make a connection with me. As soon as you do that, go ahead and send me Chapter 1. Please only send one chapter at a time, otherwise, I panic and I don't do a very good job. Your story is making me laugh. It would save time if I read it while editing, however, so make that connection fast! :D. Mutual writing relationships are always good! Anyway... I kind of forgot that this wasn't a private message, but whatever. Connection please! :P. -jsm

Haha this chapter made me laugh... however, often times you forgot to put in commas and periods after certain dialogue lines... by the way, I do beta, if you want me to help! :D. I usually fix a lot of people's grammar. For chapter one:
“I think you should get to know Cas, you know, as a brother” Mom said, watching Terrence from the car.
You need a comma after "brother." It's proper grammar :P. I'm like the grammar nazi. haha. anyway, i'll read when i get time again... really busy and all, but you're so good at keeping up with my story that i feel bad for leaving yours. i'm just super super busy! haha. ttyl. -jsm