i dont think u want to hear how awesome u r anymore xP

I liked this one, especially the last two lines. Very deep and profound. :)

-xx

Definitely my favourite of your poems, i like the flow of it and when i was reading it the pace quickened towards the end right up until the best line "Living among the alive"...it's haunting and makes me pensive. i love it!

I liked it a lot. Will definitly favorite.

I really liked the lines:

"Dead smiles for the sake of others"

"Living among the alive"

Great work and thanks for sharing. :)

faved! awesome!

fav lines:

"Dead among the living,

Living among the alive"

loved the toying with words, good job! :P