I loved this chapter! it was so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter!


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Once again great chapter! I want to know what happens next!

I loved this one. She's getting better. Finally.
And Ethan is so in love with her. If anyone had doubted that -this chapter proves it all.
I loved the bit where he told Ben the two of them are together - but why does Raven laugh? Why does she still see him as a friend.
I hope she'll open her eyes soon enough and see what's in front of her...
And about favorite chapter - I don't know. I love all of them...
You just keep writing...
Lots of love xx Shadow xx

I have an older brother named Ethan.
He finished high school this year. I started this year.
And when the Ethan in this story said his sister died i was like 'WHAT?! I CANT DIE!' haha.

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OMG! I love this story so much! send me an email and a link to your story when you get it updated! it is ! You're an amazingly talented writier!

This is an amazing story! I love it! I cant wait for the next update!

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Finally! It has been a long wait. But it was worth it.
Once again Ethan is such a sweet-heart and I wish he were real and my friend and... - but he's not. I do hope they'll end up together, really. They understand each-other and have been through many things - good and bad - together and they just click.
I'm also sorry her parents are such idiots. Yes - idiots. They just can't understand the have kids, the teenagers that are suffering because of their immature behavior, don't they?
And, yes - I did like the chapter. Especially the part where she says that there are so many emotions inside her she doesn't even know what she's feeling anymore. I get that feeling sometimes... :)
Well, I think that'd be all... Update soon - I get impatient quickly and I can't wait to see what will happen with Raven and Ethan and will there be any progress in their love...
Kisses :*
Shadow...

Her life does suck, doesn't it? But, thank God she's got Ethan.
The chapter was phenomenal and I liked her reaction to the new of her parents' divorce. I'm sure that no child could ever just be OK with something like that, no matter the age.
And I wish I had such a great guy friend. Why is Ethan only imaginary?
So, what shall I say now? Hm, can't wait for the next chapter and ... well, great job once again... :)

That... Was... Awesome... Period

When I said update soon in the review an hour or so ago, I didn't expect it to be this soon... Oh, I love you so much right now.
Now, on to the story:
It was nice that they went to the place where Ethan's sister had died. And not nice as in some weird, morbid way. Just nice. They had to get their feelings out and visiting that place surely helped.
After reading the last few lines and the way Ethan "tripped over his words as he struggled to get them out" I'm absolutely sure he feels more than friendship towards Raven. Can't wait to see how that works out.
Excellent chapter I must say...
Lots of love, Shadow :**

Wow, it's a great story... I think Ethan is in love with Raven. Don't know why but it would be awesome if they ended up together. Can't wait for the next chapter...
:)

Ben's such a jerk! Why does he think he can just go around and kiss people? Idiot! Ethan was sweet though : )

Where's the kiss?! Gosh.. It's so obvious he likes her.. Duh! : P

he's not leaving her right?
she was actually watching the movie and not him telling her goodbye for the last time??
update soon!
=D

good chapter too