this was really sad and beautiful...perfect

I love how this story isn't in past tense like most other stories do. It definitely gave it a unique feeling and I loved reading it. I think it would've been good if you had a little more detail, but I guess it's not really necessary for this story. I just would've enjoyed it more that way. :)

Kali

Aw! That's so sad! :( But it was good, even though it was so short! I liked the formatting- it was different, but interesting. Great job! :)