this was really adorable!

:D
Max is wrong - it is perfect :)

this story was quirky and cute and I rather liked it especially the bits where Max finally catches on to the little things ya' know like he suddenly has a roommate and such like... so yeah this story is kinda awesome and I hope to see more like it.

um. *garbles*

it's fantastic. :D

Short and sweet.
I really enjoyed reading this one-shot.

"It's not perfect, but Max wakes up to the Perp slobbering on his shoulder and thinks, it's close enough."

I liked the way it's written. It put a smile on my face. It's sort of rare to find a good one-shot, they're so many out there. Perhaps if you find one you could send it this way.

MaGa!

Oh! I really loved this! The writing was so refreshing and new, I almost thought you couldn't pull it off in the beginning, but this turned out to be such a fantastic story, I'm very happy to have found it. The characters were very well developed, even in such a small story, and I loved their interaction. It was so perfectly done, it makes me smile. It makes me want to quote my favorite part, only I don't have a favorite part- I loved the whole thing. I'm really quite pleasantly surprised!

On a side note, I work for Undiscovered, and I'd really like to suggest your one-shot for our first one-shot feature sometime in the feature. You wouldn't happen to mind would you? There's a link on my profile if you want to check the website, and if you have any other concerns, just message me back.

I just really loved your story! Gah! I'm so happy I found it! You don't even know, although I'm sure you've come across the bad one-shots all the time. Either way, this was definitely not a bad one-shot, and it's quite memorable and unique.

Thanks for the great read! =D
Sobriquets

Hilarious.