this one 'wrists and roses' threatens to be
really excellent; sometimes though you're
just abstruse enough, like here, to be a
trifle aggrevating. needs a little more
clarity, or a little more internal connection
that can be pieced together. know what i
mean?

this one is
most lovely.

I don't really understand this, but maybe I'm not supposed to. I like the reoccuring 'blue like'.

moths annoy me.
but
anyways
i like it. lots. ^^
write more?
and check out my story please...you might like it, love it, or hate it. ^^

i like this a lot a lot a lot. i like how you started with things that were obviously blue and then moved into things that sort of made you think a little. Me think a little. You know what I mean. I didn't like the way you ended it though. The word often seemed tacked on a bit.

Interesting start. I love the image here; it's unusual, and I like that it reminds you of school. Fascinating. Keep writing! :)

Love it. I'm sincerely out of compliments. If I had anymore to give I would, but I don't want to sound superficial. beautiful poem.

Oh god, this. I'm usually not a fan of school related poetry, but this! This piece literally blows everything I've read on the same subject out of the water. SO beautiful and so lyrical. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. I can't even describe how wonderful this poem is.

Hmm what do I think of this poem. I love the image of the woman catching moths. So incisive. However, not really sure I like it compared to school. However, that image is poignant and original enough to more than make up for all the short comings this piece might have.
Good job!

I really love this one. Your metaphors are some appealing and intriguing. I feel like I should know exactly what it's about, but at the same time I am happy to be in the dark. Well done!

ella

I liked this one a lot. I know exactly what you mean. I got the feeling you gave exactly exactly. I'm sorry I'm not very articulate. But I like how you capture a feeling, a scene, an emotion in a poem so easily and so well. How long do you take to write one of these poems on average?

I liked this one a lot. It had this horror movie spooky kids singing empty playground feel to it. Which I think might have been what you wanted.

ohohohohohohohohoho, who might this be? vicTOR??

Funny, that's how i felt too.

how is killing poor moths empathy? O.O

Love that you keep a poetry journal thing. I bet your junior year will be fantastic! (Tho mine kind of sucked actually. My sophomore year was probably the best so far)