Haha, wonderfully done. Brought a smile to my face. I love your sense of irony.

the moral left me laughing more than the story itself. i liked the last line of the story, the straight-to-the-point way of ending it. :)

Ha :) Nice! You have an original sense of humour in your writing, I like it! Love the moral :)

That's funny. I loved the ending.

~SirScott

That last sentence was fantastic. It really did make me laugh out loud.

I must say I disagree with your moral, though. One shouldn't try to change someone and make them something they're not - but the frog actually was a prince, so she really helped him change for the better: back into himself!

My personal moral for this: 'Don't try to reason with an old, stubborn parent.'

But anyway, this was a great read.

I'm not liking how the whole piece is bolded. It just doesn't seem necessary.

I do like the story though. I mean the beginning part seems like a joke I've heard many times, but I liked the ending a lot. I thought it was really funny. The moral is funny too, though it's not the moral I would've taken from it... lol.

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Daughter awoke? Maybe. Otherwise short but nice moral...and that's coming from a female. Changing people period is no good. You used a fairy tale plot to your advantage.

LOL. But, in this story the father also tries to keep his little daughter the same. So another moral men have to let their women move on. LOL great.

Nice!
But i can contradict your moral! The girl was able to change the frog prince, so she could change him and he wanted to be changed, so women should try and change men! It's just the overbearing protective faths that are too old to learn new tricks that shouldnt be changed. :)
I really liked this one, it was cute, an funny, and thought provoking! (As you can see... :))