|Reviews for Seasons of Renga|
| simpleplan13 9/6/09 . chapter 1
"past season fly away"... past seasons fly or past season flies
I think you should make each season its own stanza. I think that format would really work well to separate them and make the repetition seem less well... repetitive... lol.
I do like the repetition though. Especially, blossoms that was a nice way to tie them all together. (Maybe that's just part of it being a tanks?)
Your descriptions of the seasons were nice as well. Great piece.
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| Disabled Account sdf 9/3/09 . chapter 1
This was a nice little poem. You manage to put the essential mood of each season into a few words. Very good!