Wow. This is beautiful. And full of such striking imagery I can clearly picture what the speaker is trying to say. (If that makes sense?)

My favorite line is:

"I witness a star fall, another
promise gone -they drop like bullets-"

I love the way you compare stars with bullets.

I really, really love this!

this was beautiful
+favorite

raspberry night is a really good title :D

I liked the title. It sounded interesting and made me want to read.

I do like the piece as well. The personification of the moon was really great. I also liked the beginning with the different colors, that was really great. My only dislike was "almost like a beautiful melancholy…"... that phrase is a bit cliched, but the rest of it was really great!

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile).

I love reviewing poems :D
once again Beautiful. Really.

i loved the lines:
I witness a star fall –
another promise gone,
dropping dead like bullets.

amazing. keep up the good work.