hey it's me again,

I thought the whole invention thing was Interesting, i don't know if you've seen the movie 'a series of unfortunate events' but in that, the main girl, violet, is an inventor and i thought that she was really cool.

I loved the way you described the shadows and the way it gleamed through the glass in the window, that was mad.
i wonder what the green haze was doing around the time machine? weird.lol. that must have hurt her head man!

advice: instead of putting (brackets) when writing something seperate, try using these: -that had never worked out- :) and also remember to add comma's and full stops in the right places, like when you said: i was pointing happily to a number of buttons and an old remote on top,