|Reviews for The Missing Rocking Chair|
| Dakota 3/10/10 . chapter 1
A work of poetic genius.
| Narq 12/11/09 . chapter 1
Lol! I literally burst out laghing. "oh, Look, there's a terminte". Like, yeah, A terminte could eat an entire chair... a FAT termite!
but still, nicely done, lovely ending, and wonderful poem!
| Only10dollars 9/27/09 . chapter 1
This is awesome. You're awesome.
| awake and dreaming 9/27/09 . chapter 1
you are so clever.
how simple and to the point.
| sara 9/14/09 . chapter 1
haha. that's great. dont change it, it's perfect.
| simpleplan13 9/6/09 . chapter 1
"Oh. Look. There’s a termite."... the punctuation seems odd here. I think it should be "Oh, look."
I like the rhyming, it works well. Not forced. The ending was also great, really funny and unexpected, though I think you'd need more than one termite to eat a rocking chair...
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| Black Feather Quill 9/5/09 . chapter 1
Wow, this was hilarious lolz. Keep that up!
| ranDUMM 9/4/09 . chapter 1
HAHAHA, really funny! :D I really liked it, short and to the point, but very funny :D Great work! :)
| eaststar 9/4/09 . chapter 1
I like the simplicity to it especially. That really added to the poem. I love it!
| Morine 9/3/09 . chapter 1