   Alenor 2009-10-04 . chapter 4aww, randy sucks! that's a horrible way to break up with someone! can't wait for more though, sounds like working with rueben things could get interesting...cya next time ~ Alenor |
 Ginger 2009-09-29 . chapter 4 CATFISH! CAL ME! |
 Bluebaybiie 2009-09-20 . chapter 4Good job. :D
I can't wait for the next update ^.^
This chapter make me laugh out at some points [; |
 VampireAcademyDB 2009-09-16 . chapter 4I love love love this chapter lol srry bout the whole drafts thing :) and I wonder about the R & E thing... I |
 PrincessCherokee01 2009-09-16 . chapter 45th times the charm... Or something like that. :D |
 FLIPPER66 2009-09-12 . chapter 1PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY LINE , VERY INTERESTING |
| Ginger 2009-09-09 . chapter 3 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!I'm still hahahahahahahahahahahaha! well you get the hahahaha o never mind hahahahahahahahahahah |
| Bluebaybiie 2009-09-09 . chapter 3 I am glad that she isn't with Randy. :D
Good chapter! Can't wait for next update! |
| Bluebaybiie 2009-09-09 . chapter 2 (:
Great chapter again! :D
I hope she does find someone nice when shes working at the pumpkin farm d: |
 caramel-x 2009-09-08 . chapter 3HAHA! I liked that.
I also liked the fact that you phrased it,
"family jewels". xD
Keep it going, it may be one of my favorite
stories. |
| PrincessCherokee01 2009-09-07 . chapter 3 OMG!! That was soo funny.. not exactly the meeting I was expecting, but it suits this story I guess... :D Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Treyus Averon 2009-09-07 . chapter 3o if I didnt have to work i'd be buggin you all day about the next chapter..wait..thats what texts are for. *grin*
That dog is awesome. lol
Oh, and what kind of book are YOU readin? |
 Morine 2009-09-07 . chapter 3Thank you for the longer chapter! I definitely can't wait to read the rest. It's very captivating.
- Morine |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-09-05 . chapter 2A few typos in there so you might want to read through it. But I do like how you describe Ev's family and the end bit with the epic failure, had me actually laughing out loud.
If you are looking for something to read I'd love to hear what you think of what I have up. |
| Morine 2009-09-05 . chapter 2 I find Pumpkins to be quite romantic actually. I don't know, it might just be from "Cinderella" and the whole pumpkin-carriage changing happening.
I really like this story! I think that it's a great idea, and it's very well written.
One suggestion though, longer chapters would be nice. I know, it's a lot of work and effort, but it's such a good story, leaving us for more.
I can't wait to read more!
- Morine |
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