Wow. This is really good. You have a true talent in bring descriptions to life. I could see the doll as it decayed. Very dark. It was beautiful.

Cassandra

I'm with "my own prince" in that I think you used a bit too much in the way of description - at least in the beginning. About halfway through you really hit your stride and it flowed much better. This was good and haunting, and I really liked the end, if not so much the beginning. Good job, and I look forward to more from you.

I'm just sad that I've never really had a toy or something that I've had a relationship like this with . . .

wow..this is SO cool..!

I'm at a loss for words at this piece. It's like, I can't decide which side of the spectrum I want to be standing on.

On one side, I feel that it was a bit too descriptive, like you're just chucking details at the readers' face.

One the other side, I love the way you describe things. You don't use the usual adjectives and you use similes and metaphors smoothly - giving us some great imagery.

But damn. Fucking creepy. Hahha.

I story gave me the feeling of helplessness... of course I've been feeling that a lot lately. But everything you love has to leave or change someday, and it usually happens slowly and you can't do anything to stop it...

This reminds me of something from the Anime "Rozen Maiden" (I even listen to the season 1 theme song as I read this).

Very well written and very sad. I hate it when things that are so precious fall apart on us. This could very well describe a real person who is dying.

You have one Ganon's Realm of a gift. _