I love this one shot. Well, I think the concept is quite typical; something you could see in many fantasy/supernatural stories. But you know what, it works. And I’m a really big fan of half mortals and all. I like how a dark lord learned to love. I guess that only means I want to see a sequel.

I think you have been improving so much. You write so well. The conversation between the father and son is really great. Even for a one shot, I could see the character momentarily. Good luck to your writing and I hope to see more stuff from you.