:D
SO CUTE.
FOR SURE.
hahaha, i love Rosy.
& Lucas.

&& Rosy and Lucas :]

dammit she didnt even get a second date

Hey, this was really good. It was quite entertaining. ^_^ I have to say, I dunno what a sky is, around my place we call it a waterfall. Like "Sure you can have a drink, just waterfall." or "Can I steal some of your soda? I'll waterfall!" etc etc.

Just randomly commentating... and avoiding doing any actual work...

“You’re good.”

Makes no sense. FYI.

Okay I really have to get back to work. I'm sorry I can't give you a full-fledged review right now, writing essays (fun!), but here's me saying it was pretty amazing and I like the characters (very believable) and yeah. Good work! ^_^

This is great! I love the way Rosy acts, she's so weird. Ah, and the Dr. Pepper line. What can I say? Genius.

I liked that. Everything she says actually reminds me of a convorsation i had just a while ago...

The last few lines seemed a bit choppy to me, but other than that, I thought it was great!

First of all: a little parting?! No.
How will I survive? I'll have to focus on starting uni in under 2 weeks...

But yes, lovely little one shot! The pineapple was genius :P

Take a sky? Like how some say here in America,
"waterfall"?

Ahh! That was just so cute. :) You did an absolutely fantastic job.

I really enjoyed this, it was great!

Loved the story and Rosy talks wired but she is still adorable.
Love the way you write and keep it up. Good one shot, made me smile :)

Oh, this was hilarious! I loved the description of the people around her, like Mr. Fellows and that boy who was going to get hit by the bike. I was a bit worried but then you added that it was a five year old girl on a pink bike, so I laughed so hard. (although I think you meant 'vicious' instead of 'viscous' in one sentence. :p)

You have an absolutely lovely writing style that I love; well done! I look forward to reading more of your work :)
~Zoe

this is cute! i loved it.

So cute!
And I really don't know how you ALWAYS manage to make me fall in love with the guys in your stories. Crazy, I tell you!
Great job.

this is really good :)