OK... My suggestion on this is to export this to document form and rewrite it so that each line is single spaced and each separate piece (COUGHworstbookeverCOUGH) is double spaced, i.e.:

verse

verse

verse

verse

chorus

chorus

verse

verse

verse

etc.

Use shift for single-line breaks. If you split the parts up, and maybe use bold print for the chorus (and correct me if I'm wrong, but this song does have one, right?), I think that would make this lots easier to read.

On a critical note, I'm surprised that this is an "effing rocked out guitar" song, but there was no rhyming at all. To the best of my knowledge - and I do have quite a lot of it - rhyme is the basis of all rock and roll, or anything heavier than that.

I really really like this song! You have a talent1 A very good talent!

Peace

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