i miss the bowling pin tens line cuz i thought it was funny haha.

my favorite part though is:

She says bowling shoes look good on me,
Because I can pull off anything.

Ok not liking the ending. It's so gross. Though it was funny.

I do like the piece though. The first stanza describes bowling so wonderfully. I could never have thought of describing it that way. I also liked the bowling shoes part that was sweet. Nice title though, great pun with strike.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile).