not sure how you're able to write during an actual panic attack lol... but this one is good, i remember it from the book.

liar, i get it
it's like you're lying, you feel all of those stuff..it's good!! :P

I'm not sure if you did this on purpose or not, but I didn't like how break and mistake rhymed. They're the only two lines that did. The mistake line also seemed a bit long for the flow of te piece.

I liked this because it has a lot of emotions. The reader sees a lot about what the person is going through. Nicely done.

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