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Andrea Lotte 2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Interesting topic choice! I don't understand all of it (chimera!?) but I enjoyed it all the same. I especially like how you moved closer and closer in, like a microscope, and then moved out back to the potato peels. Nice use of perspective!
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