 RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2009-09-06 . chapter 1that was really good...though i don't know what every single one of those terms mean lol. i can still understand it regardless. these are my favorite parts:
A rigid protraction of blades through smooth skin, bleeding,
oozing out a molten metal which sizzles on the soil.
A fierce jaw boiling with the salivation of hunger, craving,
teeth glinting from the reflection of water droplets on surrounding leaves.
A spine-tingling and ground rumbling roar, rippling,
air full of warning to the mortal world.
The very last stanza is my favorite. is this a specific "type" of poem? just wondering... |