i loved this! this was amazing! i'm speechless

omg, i loved nathan.

YEAH, MAN. This is so getting nominated for Best One-Shot the upcomng SKoW round.

Y'know, I just can't imagine Nathan looking like Key's dog 'cause that's kind of freaky. Just a little bit. Plus, I'm way too in love with Key's dog. xD Uhm, yeah, just ignore that. It's normal for a girl to be more attracted to a puppy than a guy, right? Right? I mean, that's how guys pick girls up, nowadays. They go walk their dogs and the girls will coo and pet the dog. Then the guy makes the whole "Can I get your number?" move. See, it's normal, girls are supposed to be more attracted to dogs than guys.

So, reading over your author's note, I think I might take back the whole "YEAH, MAN. This is so getting nominated for Best One-Shot." Because, you know what, I so did not con you.

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Okay, maybe I did but you've got no proof. >_>

That aside, THANKYOU for the wonderful One-shot! :D You are the best AG I know.

This one had me laughing over and over, sis.

Nathan is a really interesting character, I quite like him so it's a shame that we won't be seeing him again (most likely). Especially for his totally annoying attitude. I think the best moment in the entire one shot was when Samuel was about to mash Nathan's face -shashakes head-

And Sabrina's outburst of tears and laughter reminds me of my own outburst. Ahem, you know what I mean, because...then I went to bed :P

ps: how does love topping taste?

-K.

If there's any way to kill a story about chain forwards and pizza delivery, it's to call it "cybernetic pizza." And that it is a complete shame, because the story and its characterisation was hookingly good. Sabrina was brilliant as the strong!independent!girl without tripping into Mary Sue territory, and Nathan had the perfect mix of cockiness-humility to be believed as a not-loaded guy with loaded ambition.

My favourite was still Sam, how he's such a real-to-life slob, who's equally protective of his sister. The pre-prom scene was the highlight of the story, and I especially like that Nathan HAD a reason for not going to the prom: and I mean a real reason, not an ulterior motive that typically involves Sabrina.

And the fact that they didn't go to the prom together? Ohmigod, am I ever gasping in relief.

The very last line was brilliantly strung together and packed good punch.

That was adorable!

PD: Does pizza sound fancy enough for our date?”

I'm guessing you mean P.S :)

Cute story. Love the title!

- melting moments

Years ago, I had a classmate who couldn't stop flooding my e-mail inbox with chain mails. I begged her to stop, but she remained stubborn. Argh.

I love this one-shot because...
1) I do believe in Murphy's Law.
2) All the characters are quirky and cute.
3) Yay, Nathan has asked Sabrina out!

Ah that is SO cute!! :D
I absolutely loved it!

Aw so cute!!

xx
Ali

nathan is really sweet...

i like the stroy so far i hope you update soon