"If heat could scorch bone, he'd be a barbeque pit." Holy smokes. What a great line. The entire 'burning flesh' ending is awesome. :D

I liked how you drenched this poem in imagery of heat. Everything had to do with humidity, and emotions and actions all had their own paralleling imagery of heat.

You hint at intense drug use, but I can’t say for sure. I think that could have been improved upon. The overall meaning and theme are not obvious, and I think in terms of drug use it would work better if things were more clearly defined.

I also liked the sense that the people around the subject of the poem, could smell, taste, or just know that this person was a user, that was very strong.

Much love,
Juliet.
Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)