I really like your story.^.^

hmm, good story. Seems a lot like my own, though. I think you should write more of it! ^_^ it seems interesting. keep going on with it

it's great... continue it!

Well, dear, I don't really see how it's not finished... but *you're* the author, so I dunno. But, however, I like it a lot... wish I had dreams like yours... *wonders if she should envy you or pity you...* hehehe... ^_~

Nice and weird! You should keep writing (^_^) because this is good. A title suggestion? How about "Phantasmagoria" or something odd like that...