Aha...interesting. I really didn't think that would happen but that was really interesting. I'm looking forward to see how everything will turn out for Jeremy and Natasha plus, how her friendship with her ex-boyfriend Eric will turn out. ^_^ I'll be waiting for the next update. ;)

I really like your story so far. She must have had a terrible past to be so consumed with keeping it separate and secret from her current life.
I hope things get a lot better for her soon.
Can't wait to read more :)

Interesting story so far. I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen at the party and what's going to happen between Natasha and Jeremy.

Yes! So we know a little bit more about her past! Mystery almsot solved! haha. jk.

Good chapter. I just can't wait to see what happens between Jeremy and her!

Thanks for reviewing! Dang I cant' believe what happened with Jeremy and Ryan and the ex-girlfriend. First I was confused but I understood it later.

Can't wait to see if Jeremy is starting to like Natasha! Can't wait for the party too.

Update please!

heyy
I like your story =)
seems pretty good
I really really want you to complete twisted cliches!

Aww, I liked this. The only thing I'd say is scatter things out a little more. Instead of cramming the physical description into one section, spread it out. Instead of throwing the background into one paragraph, it would be nice to see the history introduced bit by bit. I liked your sense of dialogue though, and the characters seem cool. Great start! :)

nice story. i can't wait to read more about jeremy and natasha. foster parents, huh? hm...
well please update soon :)