Now these are great chapters and the last line of Chapter One would have been a killer cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out more.

I really like this so far! Michael seems so nice :) Can't wait for the next chapter - please update soon!!

I really like the way you set the scene before getting to the present story as I know that i one of the things I struggle with myself. You did a good job of it :) The story sounds interesting and I'm going to read on now...

;P

Hey! :) I maxxed out my PM limit.
It just said that the visit was sent you your email, the one you had on here. So.. you should check it ASAP!
it was like.. basketball gurl somehting something.
that's your email right?
oh god, I really really hope so cause if not... someones gonna get a surprise!
The thing was too long for the PM so I had to email it, please let me know if you go it!


its graphic! like you wanted :)

We're off to see the Wizard, The Wonderful Wizard of Oz.
You'll find he is a whiz of a Wiz!
If ever a Wiz! there was.
If ever oh ever a Wiz! there was
The Wizard of Oz is one because,
Because, because, because, because, because.
Because of the wonderful things he does.
We're off to see the Wizard. The Wonderful Wizard of Oz