This is simple, yet beautiful.
The title fits in well with the poems.
"Each heartbeat I feel against my cheek" I really liked the wording of.
It feels a little unresolved to me, but I kind of like that. It kind of feels like it should be that way.
Nice (:

i can relate man

did you ever notice that they let you write 10,0 characters in a review? jeez lol.

i like this one, the way they're all haiku poems but linked. what made you think of this?