i like this one...especially the bars part. wrote that in the book i think.

I LOVE this! How true, silence is as telling as a full conversations sometimes. I thought this was very creative and beautiful! And the description of a heart pretty much being broken, as being 'set free' wow that's profound.

Even if you find out love is unrequited, it is better in some ways than the constant wondering, and doubt of whether or not feelings are returned. There is a sense of painful freedom ... to finally know. You captured it amazingly! You are very talented :)