It's very lyrical, the rhyme sometimes feels a little bit unrelenting, like a really noticable drum in a song that only needs a soft maracca or something. Haha I am far too tired to form logical arguments, though I did enjoy this :D

"I'm Medusa, but you're Adonis,
it'd be blasphemy to have your kiss"

were my favourite lines, great job.

Jack

I love the last line.
Using the gods as a reference was excellent. I think love is like that oftentimes - unbelievable - but a divine pursuit. I feel sorry for the character having to realise, through neglect, how little they mean to the crush.
I like your work its very real.

Viscera.