I made an account to be able to review on ur stories xD that shows how very talented i believe u are. Excellent work, all of your stories, I really do look forward to reading more by you.

Cheers,
Charlie

This has to be one of my favorite reads for a good while on FicPress. It's length is perfect; short lived but vibrant, just like summertime. The sentences were somewhat choppy, but it added to the short sweetness of the story. There were some grammar things...

“Well I hope so.” You said.

should have been '...so," you said.' However...I'm not sure whether or not it was intentional. The "errors" in un verano y un chico feel intentional; something adding spice, imperfections to catch one's eye...haha, or I'm reading into it because this is some pretty top notch writing (then again, I'm a bit of a sucker for first-person Young Adult stories).

:) '“We’re falling in love, I bet,” you said.'

9/10

Wow. A glimpse into a slice of life and proof of the power of pictures. Very well written. Still left stunned.

i enjoyed this. it was a very honest piece, full of unique touches and ideas and it was subtle and striking all at the same time. good stuff.