|Reviews for If At First You Don't Succeed|
| MandaMae928 4/28/13 . chapter 7
Hi, I've just come across your stories this past couple days. I read Faster You Fall and now this and I was wondering if you were going to continue this story cuz it was just getting good and then stopped. I'd love to experience more of Nick's World.
| LiveAndLetDie 1/28/13 . chapter 7
Wow. That's all I can say. I absolutely LOVED your stories (I think I've read most of the Complications ones and both of Nicky's). I stayed up until four in the morning last night reading Like It Or Not. I loved everything, the plot, the characters, the writing style, I'm amazed that I finally found another story this amazing that's self-published (they're usually incredibly bad). I hope you post more chapters of this story, although if you don't I totally understand.
By the way, for you to understand how much I loved your stories, I made an account to favorite and write a review. 3
Thank you for an awesome read.
| minipou 1/26/13 . chapter 7
What does Dave want? I want to know! Hope you're continuing this story, I'd really like to know what will happen to our Nicky. Good Job, I love your stories.
| heyitsstupidme 1/25/13 . chapter 7
I hope you will continue this. I really enjoyed reading it and all the awkward moments made me laugh. :)
I like that all of these stories about Kay and Josh and Nicky are connected. It's like you've created those characters not just for a short amount of time, but you tell us about their lives like they really exist.
| goudacheese 9/16/12 . chapter 7
I'VE LITERALLY READ ALL OF THE COMPLICATIONS SERIES (A WHILE AGO, TOO) AND I NEVER GOT AROUND TO REVIEWING ANYTHING WHICH IS SUPER DUMB but I just wanna tell you that I love this (and I love LION too) (and I love basically everything) but it's late right now and I have nothing particularly coherent to say except that I hope FYD does continue to ... continue ... because! I love Nicky! And, um, maybe I'll come back when I'm actually awake and review everything or at least more than one thing more helpfully and, um, yeah. Okay. But. Okay. This was the dumbest review ever and I apologize but, yeah.
| creature101 8/14/12 . chapter 7
JUST SPENT ALL DAY READING FYF AND NOW I NEED YOU TO UPDATE THIS BECAUSE I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I NEED ME SOME NICKY/JESSIE LOVEEEEEEEEE. And I really want to know why Dave is calling! And now I'm going to go read MTY because a younger Josh and Kay sounds awesome.
HURRRRRRYYYYY ANNNDDD UPPPPPPDDAAATTEEE! (please)
| Lenko 8/10/12 . chapter 7
So glad it's back! I can't wait to see how Nicky's changed and I reeeeally want to know what the call was about now! Update as soon as you can! :)
| Nuitdemeztli 8/10/12 . chapter 7
Im so glad that youve updated! :D
| krlsen 8/10/12 . chapter 7
:D :D :D super happy for the update!
| James Hiwatari 8/10/12 . chapter 7
Heh, I know that feeling. You kind of remind me I should go back to my stories too...
Welcome back and good luck trying to keep it up! ;)
| Coriander 8/9/12 . chapter 7
You are most welcome back! I've been enjoying the semi-regular updates on LION, and this is like an extra treat. I love Nicky's dorkiness, it satisfies my craving for well written but slightly fluffier goofball interaction.
(Also for some reason my mental image of Jesse is just... the hottest thing in the world. This has never happened to me with a character in a novel before, so GOOD JOB ON THE JESSE DESCRIPTION, NICKY. Four for you, Nicky. You go.)
| robot unicorn attack 8/9/12 . chapter 7
WELCOME BACK! I'm so happy you're going to continue this story! C':
But you just HAD to end it on such a cliffy, didn't you? Lol. Welp, glad you're back anyhow.
| chibikodo 8/9/12 . chapter 7
I sure hope Dave is okay. It's too early to call it a cockblock but I'm sure Nicky feels that way.. Eapecially if it turns out to be nothing. :) I find Jesse's reactions to Nicky's bumbling adorable.
| Guest 8/7/12 . chapter 6
OMG. Please update! Love all your stories and hope Like It Or Not will be cleared up because I'd like to know how Josh is how he is now and all that jazz. Would also love if you updated. Please! :)
| Nuitdemeztli 7/31/12 . chapter 1
somehow Nicky is more like Josh than Kay. Im seriously wondering how Josh became so collected and responsible...