Oh! New chapter up, which always makes me very happy. This chapter is a leaving me wanting more for sure, so if you're wondering if I would mind if you updated before a month from now.. the answer is absolutely not!

It's refreshing to see the way you portray characters habits and ages, etc in your stories. For instance when Nick is talking to Josh near the end of this chapter, and he's discussing what he thinks Josh and Kay will think, and the way he's prying for information, it really makes it believable that he's a high school aged kid with a really big crush and the nervousness of someone who is unsure of what other people think. Yet, you don't just do this for Nick. In your previous stories involving Josh and Kay there was a distinct difference between Kay's attitude and that of say.. Josh or Christian.

Anyways, things like this make it quite obvious to us readers that you care about your characters, and I wanted you to know that it makes it easier for us to fall in love with them, and keep holding on to your every chapter.

Just wanted to mention that it's odd for me to be reading a story as it's being written. I usually come across finished or nearly completed stories that I can read at my leisure. I will continue to check for updates nonetheless.

:) Looking forward to reading about their date. :)

I love

! Exciting, suspenseful.. where's the next chapter? XD And is it a date?

AH-MAZING CHAPTER!

Omg! >.< Theyre so close to kissing! =DD
I loved this chapter, just like always. Haha. I cant wait for an update! {I dont wanna wait a month...Dx}

Love it.

Seriously, you can do no wrong in my eyes! I love everything you write. I love your characters! I wish the chapters were a bit longer, but I'd much rather prefer consistent updates and shorter chapters than months between updates and a chapter so long I need to work it into by schedule..

Actually though, love it. "We’re just hanging out and Dad will make some gay national crisis out of it." -- I laughed pretty hard, and also really had a craving to back and read some of the stories about Josh and Kay because I'm so fond of them :) I hate when people say say this kind of stuff in reviews... but I would LOVE side chapters or outtakes on Kay and Josh's life in this point in time. I'm sorry that I said that but yeah!

And I'm babbling. Lol sorry!

Awesome chapter!

horrible, evil place to stop! come on!! Loving it anyways

I laughed at Kay's axe murderering, wheat farming potential, and Josh's suspiciously tousled closet activities.

So...I read the first -- or is it second? -- um, fic that you wrote...the one with Nicky as the MC, FYD, and I loved it. I prefer the main characters to be on the bottom, so I skipped the sex scene(s?), but otherwise, I loved it. Which brings me to this story, which I am very happy for! Thank goodness you decided to write more, since after Dave left, I was like, "NO!" for a good five or so minutes...got some weird looks because of it. I look forward to the next chapter!

Ash

Cute start of a story... You already sucked me in :)

Oh man, it's good to be reading more of your stuff again. I personally can't wait to get to ALL OF the stuff with his parents, personally. I know I have one or so updates I'm behind on with your stuff dealing with them, but yeah. I love their drama best. ^^ Can't wait for everything with them to be updated (if it hasn't already. Like I mentioned, super behind on all of my updates, cuz my laptop is broken).

Good stuff, this. Keep up the good work.

I'm so glad you're writting a sequel =D i can't wait for the next chapter! e Jesse!

I like! Very interesting concept. Moar plz.

Yay date \o/
I totaly agree with Ashton, straight guys don't ask other guys to the movies u.u that one is obvious.
Cokey, reminds me so much of a friend its insane o.o only he highlights his hair weekly, and isn't that much of a slut, i mean, he manages to stick to the same boy more than a few hours x3
keep up the amazing work :3

Oh man. I feel so mortified for Nicky. XD

Will Nicky go with Dave's advice? LoL What will the date be like.. hmm..

I'll be happy to see another chapter in a month.. or whenever. :)

>_> Just in case you were wondering...its not a good idea to read this story in English class on your iPod.
Haha. I was trying so hard not to laugh when Ashton and Nicky were talking at lunch. (x
Especially the part about the underwear, or lack thereof. {However you say it...}

I love this and all of your stories.