|Reviews for Badasses Don't Walk on Sunshine|
| are.theee 2/23/10 . chapter 1
i loved this! the way luke thinks is totally adorable and hilarious. it's supposed to be lighthearted and fun, and it totally achieves that. i agree with you on the whole jaw-dropping epiphany bit, totally overdone and boring. this was sweeter and more sincere, in a way.
maybe write an epilogue? three years later or something? marriage? i dunno. i just like these characters )
| Sasha 'The Dramatic' Blue 2/17/10 . chapter 1
hahahaha that last line just got me. i loved it and the dimples;]
| Genato 2/13/10 . chapter 1
Your plot is good and all but the way you write it... Hmm... It's just that, there's too many thoughts.. like your characters always have the attention span of a gnat or something. Although it many be endearing sometimes, sometimes it's just... crazy disorganized?
But I really like your plots and your interesting characters. Just try to hold back your details a little and it'll be better I think.
| iiHEARTyuu 1/27/10 . chapter 1
Bahahahaha. Luke is hilarious. Such a cute badass.
| strawberrycrush 1/27/10 . chapter 1
I like it..!
Sweet and short..!
| Amethystars 1/21/10 . chapter 1
Tahnk you so mcuh for this story... I was super stressing out over my english exam tomorrow and this was the perfect way to take my mind off of it. Great story!
| FizzyLizzy 1/21/10 . chapter 1
WHAT a character. It's so much fun reading about a character who is perfect and flawed at the same time. You had me laughing out loud with his cute little random commentary and that last line, pure gold. You don't find me loving down-right self-centred, I-think-I'm-God guys, but you just cannot help it with Luke. It's so refreshing to read about an arrogant guy who is ACTUALLY arrogant, not like the perfect, misunderstood type of heroes.
The only issue I had was although his need to constantly reassure himself and everyone around him that he was badass was hilarious, in some parts, it was a little overdone. Like he'd say something and add, 'because I'm badass', which I think is not really needed because you've already beautifully introduced his character as a self-loving try-hard (in a good way).
Other than that, I think it was a mighty enjoyable read!
| Virginia T. Beth 1/15/10 . chapter 1
Okay, so this was insanely cute. I loved Luke! You pulled off that wannabe badass voice perfectly. Totally worth reading. Awesome job.
| nonaccount 1/11/10 . chapter 1
SO CUTE! I LOVE IT! I especially like the male perspective and it was funny too - so good. :)
| Anonymously Yours 1/11/10 . chapter 1
This is so hilarious and cute and sweet and Luke is...just adorable! Very good job :)
| Seoulishly 1/5/10 . chapter 1
How refreshing! No big, eye-opening epiphany! Loved it! You're officially one of my famous authors!
| Boo 1/4/10 . chapter 1
the pen thing is hilarious:)
| vball chica 1/1/10 . chapter 1
hey, i've been reading all your one-shots and so far, i think this is my favorite one yet. It's not so cliche, and doesn't have that overused epiphany that i get sick of... great job!
| jayyy 12/28/09 . chapter 1
I don't know how many times I've read this, but it is pure magic!
| AznDr3am3r 12/22/09 . chapter 1
lol I love this story.
It made me laugh, especially when Luke kept on going about him being a badass ;p