Loved it, update soon!

omg! I can't wait for more!

Love it so far! Update soon!

wow markus is sucj a dork! anyways i loved it!

"if you were wating for your oportune moment that was it" - Jack Sparrow; Pirates of the Caribbean: the curse of the black pearl! I love that movie! Best one in the Pirates Series! anyways loved the chapter! Plz plz plz plz write more!

wow... i really like how she lives above her grandparents reasturant!! thats cool!! i also like how she wears skates as a aprt of her uniform!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY like ryan!! he sounds so funny.

jason, and the 9th is not a Tuesday, that's a Friday, this Friday. So do you mean the update will be on Friday of next Tuesday?

this is really good!! i like the idea ! could u plz plz plz write more? thnx

write write write!OMG this is so amazing! I love it!! plz write some more! ( ur back to shcool gifts was amazing.. :-)

THIS IS A FANFICTION! THIS SHOULDN'T BE ON THIS SITE. If you have to have a disclaimer for you characters they're not yours and that means that this story isn't original. FICTIONPRESS if for original works, which yours is not.

Aww that was sweet!! update soon :)

good beggining... and i read your A/N, and you should change the name band, because if you used jonas it would be a fanfic, not from fictionpress... and it would be great to change the setting to NYC ;)
Please update ASAP

Hey babe! Guess who?

Nice work so far. I remember the basic plot, but I didn't remember exactly what happened in every chapter. Plus, reading it on the computer is much easier that reading your handwriting- even though yours is a million times better than mine!

Keep up the great work!

This was a great first chapter.


i started High school too..im staring today..

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