amazing I love it already! :)

I like her spirit, although she agreed pretty easily to go out with him despite that :P
Nice story! ♥

So cute.

I'm a tree-hugger. Lol.

Ri

It was really cute, I enjoyed reading this. :)

aw, this was really cute
i enjoyed reading it =)

This was the greatest oneshot!!
I loved your characters and your dialogue...it was so cute

I like it! :D Carter sounds so..Swet!

HOOKED ALREADY, PLEASE CONTINUE

all i can say is...AWESOME!! =]

AWESOMENESS! This was so ADORABLE! Anyway, I loved it, maybe I'll even read some more by you! - RoseBriar

(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books and stories.)

Aw... this was so cute! He watched her for 3 years?!?! Thats so adorable (and in my eyes romantic) in a slightly creepy way. I loved how he stuck up for her no matter what! I loved her attitude at the party. She doesn't take crap from anybody! YES!

I also loved the length of this. Some oneshots are only a couple thousand words if that. The length was great! It made it much more exciting to read, knowing that there was a good amount to read!