I like your use of the word 'demeaning' in the opening stanza.

"Making sins a nonentity among demons." Interesting concept.

"Nothing was made for him." I love the tone of this line--it's so abrupt and heart-wrenching.

"Maybe, his thoughts persuade him, it will be the truth instead. And then he might be able to stay in space forever." A very fitting and powerful ending. :)